Very nice and would do great for a labyrinth in a video game when looping. Enjoyed it overall.
Ya got something here...
This bit is definately something worth going further into. It sounds like a great intro into a great song. By itself, a little boring after the first 30-45seconds, but i think it'd do well if you added more to it
Interesting things happening, but revise it a bit.
The fact that this is a trumpet blows my mind, okay now that's out of the way. Nice melody. The main problem with this track is the sounds used. Too much distortion in the melody (sorry trumpet, guitar... thing), dreary bass sound, and poor choice of drum sound effects. It's a nice try, but maybe boosting the tempo in addition of a sound change-up would also help. I like the minor key and the melody, but instead of coming off as mysterious (which is what I'm guessing you were going for) you ended up sounding a bit boring and depressing at the same time. Not bashing the idea, all considered, just rethink your approach. Thanks for the experimental track, and good luck on improving!
Much appreciated. I always respect constructive criticism. I'll see what I can do to improve on this, but I'm not sure if I'm going to continue this one yet.
the song is
boring, only dead people can listen to this
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.