That bassline and the drums sound like they have reverb on them, maybe too much.
I would really love to hear that bass be a lot more crisp. You know so it can be really nice and clean sounding, maybe touch up the mastering too.
The melody throughout the whole track is a nice touch and it helps if anything, yeah.
-But try layering synths for the lead so it's not so recognizable.
I really like the tone of this anyway, it sounds really dark and heavy.
Great track, but could be cleaned up a bit :P
Keep practicing, I see potential.
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