It's practically perfect. I am interested to know why you elongated the end of the second bit, I was hoping to loop it -_-
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. The addition of a piano cover of it in the remix is beautifully done, and I do believe you hit all the correct notes. It loops very well, which I do enjoy. I could easil sleep to this.
Listening to this has brought back many feels I have felt throughout the Fable series. I see my younger sister in 1, blinded by bandits. I see the Spire and lord Lucien in 2, forking poor people as slaves to achieve a goal he lost many years ago. I see my brother and fall mentor in 3, the Crawler overtaking everything I had loved and lost.
The person writing the post before mine obviously hasn't heard the original.
There is no more to it because it's a remix of a song that has no more to it.
Very nicely done, I didn't like the game much myself after a while but this is a nice version of the music box and has a far better ending to it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.