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This is dedicated to that one guy that hated the last one. You suck, but I really did appreciate the criticism and commentary! I hope you guys like this and if you do or don't let me know why! cheers.


You've got something

Music is music, and the more you learn about doing what everyone else does, the less time you'll think of what satisfies you.

This has contrast, sharp contrast with the drop. Some mastering is in order, heavy kick and a more full snare sound will fill this out nicely. Volume swells are that sequenced synth at the end would help close it maybe?

Take what you have, and take it out of the box!!!!

eatbox1997 responds:

Thanks man. I see what you mean. If I have some spare time in the next couple weeks, I'll shop this song a little bit and let you know dude. Always a treat to hear some advice from somebody who knows what they're talking about.

I'm hard to please

This song felt like 2 entirely different songs were mashed together. Many of the beats feel out of place and random. I told you to have a heavier drop in your next song, but this song constantly uses the same drop. This song had less personality than your last song. Over all, this is not your finest work, "Clock + Swagger" was better.



eatbox1997 responds:

Whoa take it easy tarzan. Your last review had a lot more good points and substance. This just feels mean and contrived.


Good stuff

If you were to split up the song into sections depending on the melody or how that part sounds, they would all sound great. But the song as a whole, all those parts put together, is not as strong as it could be. As far as how each element of the song sounds (bass, wobble, etc) it all sounds really good, much much better than your Cloak+Swagger song. The improvement from that to this, is enough for me to say that your next song is going to be great.

eatbox1997 responds:

Well thanks man! I really appreciate the feedback. I guess I'm officially going on a dubstep binge then. I usually do classical and jazz (for college) and this isn't my normal area of expertise, but if you really think I'm heading in the right direction, I gotta say I might as well keep at it. I'm gonna keep all of your advice from the last two songs in mind too. But yeah thanks man. the criticism means a lot.

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4.54 / 5.00

Nov 28, 2011
7:53 PM EST
File Info
3.3 MB
2 min 55 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.