LOVE IT! Some sounds may be a little low, but HEY, it`s MJ:)
I liked the melodies! I did notice that you had a lot of sounds either too loud or too soft. almost like a jumble. Also the percussion was drowned out a lot by that issue. Keep working on it tho. youve got a nice start! idk what DAW you are using but play with limiters, compressors and EQ's! Good Luck!