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Uploaded
Nov 26, 2011 | 7:05 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.5 MB
2 min 14 sec
Score
3.08 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.08 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
444 Plays | 23 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

Lots of thump, and experimentalness. Trying to push my limits in FL. Hope you enjoy it. :D

Lemme know what ya guys think, and if you use this in a game/animation, please give credit to Sathla aka WallofYawn on Newgrounds. Thank you. :)

Reviews


ThisIsAnEmergencyThisIsAnEmergency

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Different

This is definitely different.

I'll start off by saying, I enjoyed all of the melody sounds and patterns as well as the entire dark feeling I get from the track. They also build-up a little bit throughout the song and really brought a few epic parts to it.

Now, I believe I need to mention the shaker throughout the song, it played through the entire song and eventually got pretty annoying. I would probably add that to some parts and take it out of others. The song, also changes up a little much for me to consider it one entire song.. like at 1:52, you should have taken that and tried to turn it into an entirely different song. I probably enjoyed that melody the most out of anything in this.

Your drum/snare pattern was very enjoyable but the kick in itself sounded too generic of an instrument. You should probably fool around with all the kicks in FL Studio, add reverb and such, or combine some, or possibly look for new drum packs.

This belongs in a Flash Animation, I hope an animator here uses it.

With all that being said, I would've probably placed this in the Miscellaneous category because I personally believe it takes more than just a Hip-Hop type of recurring drum pattern to consider something Hip-Hop.

I hope my few words have helped you're future producing in any way possible.

-Emergency


WallofYawn responds:

Thank you E, that was a good critique. This is just a base audio. A teaser if you will. I'm definitely gonna remake/master this, and I'll take into account your critique.

The shaker: yea, I noticed that, too. I'll change it up tomorrow or the next day, when I have free reign of the computer.

I'll see about making it more consistent. I try too hard sometimes at trying to make an epic song, and sometimes I change it up too often. I need to get my production/song writing skills to be a bit better, but I'll try to perfect this.

Also, the kick was not from FL. It is from a drumpack, but I agree, I need a better kickdrum. Maybe a more bassy/thumpy one.

I placed it in hip hop, because to me that's the closest label I could place on it. I didn't put it in Miscellaneous, because I thought it might have more views under hip hop.

Anywho, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully I can fix all the issues, master it, and put it on an album some day. Thank you,

Chris


ShiningFaithShiningFaith

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice and Dark =o

Not my style, but a good tune nonetheless. The thump could be thumpy-er though / also snare needs more love :(


WallofYawn responds:

Thank you for your critque. I will take into account your suggestions. Make no mistake, this is not the final version of this track. I will be editing it every step of the way.

I'll be editing a bit more, then importing it into acid pro, or protools(whichever I can get a hold of) to finish things up/master it.