Needs filler.

Very boring intro in my opinion, I see what you were going for but it's still meh.
The snare needs tuning down as well.
At 0:30 that weird synth, it's got a decent melody, but it needs to be quietened down a lot, along with the next segment, it's really loud in comparison to the intro.

I like the piano bit at 1:15 however, it's a nice little melody.
The end is lacking in anything interesting in my opinion.

Overall, boring track, nothing to hold my interest massively, but it's got a nice tune to it. A bit of filler between segments, maybe a more complex drumkit wouldn't hurt either. You probably need to work on keeping the volume in check and you're good to go.
Still, it's decent, but needs work.

-EndlessBinary-