:D Sweet i love the Owl in that game ^^ hes so...random and unknown...i hope he comes in more games
Good effort, but some things to be said
It's a nice approach. The drums are very choppy but that's not necessarily a bad thing - it adds up to the originality.
One of your synths is ridiculously out of key though, that really degrades the quality. And there doesn't seem to be any bass. If you'd improve on that, it would run much smoother and actually rise above the masses. You should also add some volume slides to the drum fills to make them sound less canny.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.