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Would like some feedback on this if you can be asked, Much love :D x

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hmmm

towards the end it becomes more powerful, but the major transitions seem disjointed and their melodies don't seem to support each other. Some sounds seem a bit superfluous in contrast to the strong presence of the percussion. i would suggest shortening the song a little and taking out some parts, giving it less weight to carry so that the transitions become more fluid and impactful. otherwise the harmonies are good and you can tell there's an underlying progression that just needs to be unearthed.

MaccasEngland responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I know it sounds silly but i didn't realy want the melodies to stand out that much. It's not supposed to go anywhere being an ambient song, but i'll definately apply some of the things you said and see how it turns out xx

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Uploaded
Nov 21, 2011
3:28 PM EST
Genre
Ambient
File Info
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7.1 MB
6 min 12 sec

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