dude i love it, one of my favourite snl skits of all time into one of my favourite genres of all time, 5 outta 5 purely for awsomeness!
No seriously add a cowbell and it will be complete.
Other than that its pretty good even for your second dub song!
it might not be loud enough but i actually did put cowbell in for a few parts, maybe it just needs moar
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.