at the beggining
it is too down-lifting for my taste since its at the start of this preview.
Add some more melodies , such as some uplifting melodies.
But yea like I said, its my preference, some people will like that down-lift effect.
you got the bass frequencies filled, add some more treble frequencies to counter that noise starting 18s to make a clean balance.
Keep it man!
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