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Author Comments

My first real song I've ever made. Sure I've made melodies before, but never a full song \o/ Though there's room for improvement, and I'd love to find out how to make it better, so don't hesitate to critique it for me!

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So...

I think it's all too flowing. Nothing really changes with any of the instruments and the unpredictability of the melody weaves everything together so much that it's boring. Though I do like that bouncy mystery to the unpredictable melody. It just needs to change up more, with the beat, with the melody, or perhaps save a synth to be added in later. There are some really simple changes that can be made that can easily fool ears into thinking some huge dynamic has spun in a different direction. You've got flow, you just need to take it even further. :)


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deidaraart5 responds:

Hey, thanks so much for the crit!
I'll try and mess around with it some more to fix it up (Still new at this whole music making thing, haha. And I hardly know how to effectively use FL studio yet as well)
Do you have any tips on how to fix it up? (Just send a note if you do, obviously)

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Credits & Info

deidaraart5
Author

Listens
372
Downloads
22
Votes
2
Score
2.68 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 20, 2011
2:03 PM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
1 min 38 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.