3 hours you say
I will admit i loose track of time when doing music r my artwork but 3 hours for a 1:03 track is not good. dont know what programs you used and wether you actualy created the peano your self useing a keyboard but as southwest22 said its incomplete and doesn't have much going for it. I got no tips for you other than keep trying.
I am completely new to the reason studio and this is my first track using it. I am counting the time it took to read through the tutorials, general BSing with flapp while we were recording, and lunch, so I think 3 hours is pretty good considering I have no midi and had to interpret his bass playing (piano wasn't hard at all as I am a bit of a pianist and am familiar with the keys), Besides. It loops well don't you think?
It seems like an incomplete song, it feels like it has potential though I think it needs work, still good for a first attempt.
That's what I told flapp