I'm not familiar with the Bambi Techno tune by Kobojsarna, so I'll just have to review this piece as it sounds on its own.
I think that it's well formed and you've got a certain poise with the beat. I think that the vocals are a little incomprehensible, unless you really concentrate on them. That's a minor niggle, as the rest of the track sounds pretty good.
Perhaps I'd have considered a little more in the way of variation, though that might be down to the original sound that is there, but I'd consider making the solo sound a bit more varied from the "basic" sounds of the beat and the melody blending together. Whether fading one out and letting the other rule the roost for a few revolutions would be the way to go, or even adding different instruments, I'm sure a bit of experimentation could be warranted.
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