i'm liking the overall vibe of this song. it's quite relaxing, very soothing. the bassline moves really well.
nice synth introduction. i was beginning to tire of the song. good to bring in something new.
the volume seems uncontrolled here. i assume you intended for it to happen, but i do not enjoy the sporadic volume bursts. it kills the calmness and chill the song originally had.
my main complaint is the synth. i was absolutely in love with the beginning, and the first introduction of it was not too bad. as it continued though, the volume spikes destroyed the smooth atmosphere. on top of that, the synth as a whole drowned out the entire percussion line you had going. i can barely make out the drums during the synth parts, except for the snare.
good song from the start, but as it progressed went downhill. cheers!