This is pretty cool. I'd put more work into some of the effects to try and get a more novel sound in some spots, and maybe switch out to some sort of break with a different core pattern eventually, then return to the main line. That's all kinda just me though. Feels like the point of this was more to try out all the different things with the main line so it kind of makes sense that there's no break.

Anyway, I'm just rambling. It isn't bad at all, but I'd revisit it later on. I like the way it goes out though.