You fackin whore...
Great storytelling as usual here Wyze. Some rhymes seem a tad stressed, but that's your stylo so it's the norm. My fav is the crashes on the beat leading into the hook. I think they really add to the building ambiance.
Well, I've had this beat kicking around for a while, in addition to most of the story. So I decided to record it the other day. Here's what came out. Hope you all Enjoy.
You fackin whore...
Great storytelling as usual here Wyze. Some rhymes seem a tad stressed, but that's your stylo so it's the norm. My fav is the crashes on the beat leading into the hook. I think they really add to the building ambiance.
Thanks man, and ya, I should really work on those stresses
Disagreeing with Mao!!!!
I think the beat and the lyrics go just fine together.
Storytelling is great, solid track. Really feeling it man!
Thanks man, glad you liked it. Fun fact: this beat was inspired by Immortal Techniques Crimes of the Heart
I remember this beat...
Nice story telling Wyze. Not much crit on this to be honest, I'll let Ses troll by and give the word on how this sucks. But one thing I thought was that the lyrics/mood don't sound cohesive with the theme of the beat, maybe thats just my interpretation of the music; I think the bell melody is effective, but maybe the held synth notes counter act the feeling...
Remember your Ps and Qs :)
haha, thanks for the words man. And it's possible, I remember I originally wrote this to a different beat. Maybe I'm just getting a different feel off this beat then you
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.