Sounds like we're inside the head of Darth Vader.
It certainly conveys a sense of eeriness very well. However, with such regular breathing, it feels as if the "character", or one self if that's what it's supposed to be interpreted as, is able to keep calm and remain unaffected by the environment he/she's in. Perhaps the breathing should have been "designed" around the ambient audio, perhaps opposed to composing the track around the breathing?
Pretty cool, but...
I think the breathing was cool and especially the way it keeps the "beat", tough I wish it was more "random" and didn't confine itself to a beat.
It was pretty cool, but I wish you could have mixed down the breathing after a while, the way the song "mutates" from a creepy atmosphere to a really symphonic piece really took me by surprise (in a good way).
In all, a pretty cool song, but it could need some improving :)
Wow. I love to heard how this would sound with all the surround sound. Personally, I thought the breath was a little creepy, and kinda annoying when he was breathing in. I think the loop would have been cooler without it. It a great track of ambience music though. Keep it up.
I did try to link, but for some reason it kept sending me to the main youtube page instead of to a specific video. You might want to check your link.
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Yeah, the original presentation of this piece didn't mix the breathing and the other audio directly, but I had no choice to make it all one combined stereo mix for NG. Based on your comments, perhaps I'll lower the volume level of the breathing for this mix and re-upload.
Oh, and NG always automatically puts spaces in URLs, it's unavoidable. Just have to remove them and the link will work. :)
Thanks for the review!
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