it shows, but that's not bad
yeah that bridge section is pretty cool, with a little doodle on the one string, and then how it returns for the closing bars... nicely done. the chords and transitions in between the riffs didn't really work for me, but i can imagine with the full band behind the guitar that might work out much better (solo guitars, "ooh yeahs," etc). i feel like each line of vocals was really too drawn out too long, and it made it all drag a little - but the lyrics are fascinating as hell, so yeah. 6.5 and 4'd
Thanks for your review man. This tune really needs a lot of work. It also sounds amazing on an electric. That bridge with the right distortion and reverb sounds amazing.