I really enjoy the noise in this song. Especially the last minute with the hello's.
I thought it was good. I loved the staticy guitar. Personally, I think if you'd just left your voice without effects it would have sounded better. You're a good singer as it is, no need to add effects, in my opinion. 4/5, 8/10. Keep up the good work dude!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.