Good But..

Good but by that other review i dunno what to say. Well done to sheezeyarts i guess. Whtas the point in stealing.So for that im going to help that person who it was stolen by.

Well man!

This is okay the sybth is very well put man! The durms they were ok but they could of been done better!(=D) Well still yo did a wonderful job man!

Keep it V man!

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It's getting there.

Ok, I see where you're going, and you actually explained to me earlier that you didn't like it. I was going to help you with it but I couldn't connect to ya. I wasn't quite sure where beat 1 was. Like, it was kinda hard for me to find the rhythm. The instrument choice was good though. It doesn't need more, but for a higher Diversity rating, I would use more instruments or more variations. Originality, gave it a 4 cuz it sounded like somethin' I heard before. The name escapes me though. I think you sorta gave up on this song because you hated it and it was already done. Well, I hope I can help you out on your next song, because it IS geting there. It just needs that one thing, like I told you before. Somebody else could probably tell you, but I can't really put my finger on it right now.

It's nice to review, even if you don't like the song, you can help someone out. That way, you can expect more and better music from that person.