Very interesting. Odd choice of instruments, especially what sounds like whisteling. However everything is a little TOO echoey and that puts me off a bit. The chord pattern isn't particulary catches me and is in contrast with the instruments, which create a very definite feel, as the chord structure doesn't really go anywhere or do anything to give the piece a mood. I think if you worked on that you could have something very nice here, but until then it feels a little stale despite the ood sounds.
I'll sharpen the sound more next time before export. But, I know what you mean, about the "staleness", of sound; it doesn't really change much as in, for a melody, and there really isn't much of a difference between the chorus chords; and the melody chords. I guess, there aren't that many cuts in the beat as a whole, either. I have to take the time to put all of that into the song; so, now when i make a new one, I'm going to make it a priority, to take that bland feel out of the situation and give it a little more life, apart from the monotone, melodies, some times i get caught up in the echo and it throws me way off too, i make so much music a day, that i treat sound kinda cynical in a way, but thanks for the input, i appreciate the feed back.
I don't like it
well thanks anyways...
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