The stopping and starting is enjoyable at first but gets a litle tedious after a while. Perhaps you should have let the strings fade out for a little longer rather than stop so abruptly which is a little jaring. The melody line is nice because it wanders, it goes places and it isn't the static repetitive riffs you often get with this sort of music . Of course doign that sort of nomadic melody is harder and thus some parts of this piece sound a little off. Still i enjoyed it throughout, are you sure you didn't mean to make it a loop because it loops nicely? You really should have thought pf a better name though, "faded innocence" is so cliche!