Now, don't get me wrong this is a great song. Just wanna give some constructive criticism here.
Now, I honestly cannot listen to this song for a whole lot. This is due to all of the throbbing effects used. I love the song itself, and it's apparent that you spent quite a bit of time on it. My favorite part is at the 02:12 mark, the reason being is I can actually listen to it without feeling my head pounding.
So, what I'm getting at is perhaps try to put all of your focus on the song itself rather than making headache inducing throb effects.
Again, don't get me wrong this is obviously not my taste. I hope that you continue to grow as a musician, because your stuff is fantastic!