Far too repetitive. The repetition of the opening melody gets annoying quickly. However once it drops out and we get the longer bass line taking the lead it becomes more enjoyable. The drum loop is a little simple and the whole rhythm of the piece makes it feel a little thumping and forced. However when you have the melody and counter melody going together you get a nice sound. The guitars sound a little sharp, perhaps a little to distorted or they just need some more equalizing. The structure is good though and it loops well.
Thank you for the response. I'm new in FL Studio and I can only make simples songs like that. Little rough, I know.
I appreciate your response as knowledge for me.
Thank you for show me that point of view.
Can you review my other attempt?
If it's not bother for you. Thank you!