I like the beginning, and in all reality this song is great. Great riffs, good percs, the only real thing you need to learn how to do better is the drum work!
Go on google and find yourself some awesome drum samples that are different from the FL presets, and then try reoing your drum work.
I liked how you changed the tempo between cut and normal time. But i noticed that the times that you hit the crash were offbeat? It sounds if your hitting them on the 14th note in 4/4 time. It should hit on the 1st beat.
So get yourself some better samples, make the drums a little more varied, and keep it up!
I am thoughroughly impressed.
i liked it. it was a good sounding an' looking song. the idea was good an' the maker of this song is really want to do a good. thank you!