At first, I thought it was just going to be a piano piece, which would have totally been fine, but the rythm and synth raelly add to the flow of the piece. You certainly thought this through well!! I really enjoyed this.
A few possible corrections:
1) At the end you should either make the outro chorus louder, so we don't have to turn up our speakers to hear it. -OR- you should add it to a final climax. This piece it kind of missing that central build up. It just falls away when I really wanted it to build up. That softer chorus ending COULD have a huge impact, but it has to have a contrasting climax before it. Otherwise, it just won't seem significant on the listener.
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