Too Much Noise.

It gets a little to repetative though. Think about shortening the intro just a little bit. also, the distortion is a little much, although i can see the style that you are going for. just make sure to keep a balance between the clean sounds and the distorted ones (Ex: at 1:38). the distorted synth sounds kinda like a construction drill. :/

Just be careful about what sounds you are using. Try creating the same effect with less distortion. Maybe put some rests in to break up the continous sound of it, and also to create rythm.
Sounds good at 3:14. and some distortion beats there to accent certain notes.

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