I like the switch between heavier and lighter instruments back and forth.
all i can say is good, man, and the tone changes are curiosly refreshing when you have been listening to marching and bass and choir for a while. something out of the ordinary for you, my friend. i like it.
This was great.
all was great.
I hope you make more.
interesting.. less flat than most orchestral pieces - that bass doesnt seem to quite fit in tho.. still it gets better with the shakuk.. however you say that instrument.. and the piano.. but then it gets weird again when u bring in that very synthy.. whatever it is.. I dunno man you went off on some really weird roads with this one.. its sorta like a giant stitched together frankenstein monstrosity of doom! LOL
then it gets all calm and peaceful - this part is nice with the piano strings and pizzicato and those little crashes every now and then.. dunno it was very random.. but I guess a lot of your songs are :p
I do like your use of percussion again. Sounds like in the intro the french horn hits a bad note, and again the second time it loops. That lead that comes in later could have been turned down, it sounded relatively "clear" in contrast with the rest of the instruments. 4/5
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.