I don't know, it's aight
The chorus part is complete hardstyle, no lyrics going on that. I'm not a fan of the lead synth, kinda annoying. Might be too high volume? The verse is pretty nice, not a big fan of the drum sounds used though. It isn't very hip hop imo. The melodies are good except for the lead synth - as I said before, not a big fan of that. So overall, it's aight.
then again, this is more of maybe a trance track. You're talking to a hip hop head right now. Check out the user mainstreambeats, he has some good club/hip hop stuff that you might want to look at.