Not bad :D
I really like the beat of this tune, and the drums don't sound half bad. I like the way everything is organized in this track as well, it sounds like you've got your drops all lined up properly :]
Things to look at:
- I think when people told you change it up, they meant melodically; the beats are right on, but your chord progressions are pretty repetitive here.
- I would definitely focus on the mastering of your tracks a lot more, what you have here is a good blueprint; you need to make sure that your drums have enough force and clarity to match up to "hip-hop industry standards" if you really want to get noticed!
Overall not bad, but could use a couple adjustments
~Sonik
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