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THIS WAS MEANT TO BE UNRELEASED FOREVER, BUT I LISTENED TO IT AND DECIDED I SHOULD GET SOME CRITICISM ON IT - SO HERE IS A SONG.........

PRODUCED BY ALLROUNDA!!!

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Great job mang!

Great lyrics man, flow was good too! You need to practice your mixing skills though.


Luke responds:

yes i do...


Needs a bit of mastering

But the lyrics... GOD the lyrics are amazing. You have some big stuff ahead of you. But the beat, when behind your lyrics, seems a bit quiet. And it's a really good beat. It should be brought up a little.


Luke responds:

I might mix this one down a bit more my man, I've learned a bit since - I love this song, and I'm glad you do as well. Real happy to hear you're digging those lyrics - That was the mission!


Chill as fck

Love the beat to this song; chill, smooth, and kinda reminds me of the 90's (Thank You by Dido would go perfectly with this song :] )

The vocals are a nice touch, and I really like how well they flow with this song (your style kinda reminds me of Shing02 from the Samurai Champloo soundtrack)

Things to take a second look at
- The beat seems like its a bit low behind your vox, and It would have been nice to hear it brought forth a bit more

Overall, sick shit dude :]
~Sonik

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Skilled jazz

Is that some jazz I hear there? The background beat is quite great. More great rhymes from you once more again. The tune gives a feel of feeling sad like you just lost something and there is no way of getting the person or thing back from where you now begin anew. You try to move on but sometimes want to head back and see it sometimes.

The lyrics give me a feel like you are just in constant pain and that shake I hear every now and then kind of makes me think of someone shaking a pill bottle actually which is cool and strange to me too. The backing beat helps move your message as well too. The song is great, very well done.

Overall, more great lyrics, gives a feel of sorrow as well.

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this is fawkin dope

this is slick man, not jus that typical good track, to me this rocks it i dunno I think NG should have a higher rating system then 10, cause its hard 2 put a few tracks together an say ya thats 10 thats 10 too . maybe I should cracked down more so on my voting then ... HAHA> anywho, back on topic

I find your emotion in this perfect. Im diggin the whole vocals man, i think when I send this message an i hear this more ill find more shit i shoulda said on here that im really diggin, like the line ' find a similar breath ' now its not the words, but the way it was said that , that lil line gives that bang to me ya know, those things that stand out - make the emotion more real ya kno, itsa dope track man, im diggin it - ike Mao said, the lyricism is great

great job.


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Luke responds:

Thanks a lot PhrO... You guys gave me hope for this track haha, real glad!

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Credits & Info

Luke
Author

Listens
2,215
Downloads
74
Votes
230
Score
0.82 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 8, 2011
2:44 PM EST
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
File Info
Song
3.8 MB
4 min 12 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.