Interesting :p
Right off the bat this song hits me as a funky-psychedelic acid trip of a song; I can dig it :]
The patterns in this sound a bit off, but still stay refined in a good way (its kinda hard to explain i guess), and I could see where this song has a lot of potential.
Things to take a seconds look at:
- Although I did like the kind of akward/ progressive feel of your note progressions, I would have liked to hear a bit more solid chords.
- It may just be out of personal preference (but I think it would be bad ass if you brought in a sick (flying lotus style) drum beat about half way through
I don't think this song is bad by any meand, but it is a bit rough around the edges
~Sonik
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