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Two Song Starts [WIP]

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First Song: Forever Isn't So Long (With You)
Second is: Pleasant Journey

They are only very very very basic ideas, much development to be done. I'm only uploading for a friend ^^

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Not classical, but...

... a nice start (sounds like Micellaneous to me). :)

The transitions are abrupt and the song is lacking in instrumentation... your friend should consider working in some more low strings and some percussion (REALLY needs percussion at the way it's going). Also, he should consider spreading out his chords more, they are too close and thus offer dissonance at some points. One other thing to look over would be endings... neither song has a proper ending... now, I don't know if this is some sort of reduced demo or something. For the first song, the reverb seems a bit off at first, with the instrument coming in at 'odd' times (hard to describe, did he record this?).

Since it isn't orchestral, I don't have much else to add, since it's out of my range.

Best of luck to your friend, tell him to keep up the good work. :)
-Samulis

FKProductions responds:

Thanks so much for your words, but this is completely a misunderstanding (my fault).

I was only uploading this so a friend could hear it, its just two ideas for separate songs. I am really surprised I got a review on this and not many of my actual songs :3

I have worked much more on both songs. The funny thing is these used to be together :3 that's why I wanted to show my friend. Because it had been troubling me, why the original song wasn't working. Then it became obvious, they were two separate songs! Yes, I was having trouble with the delay on the bass, fixed, they weren't even songs so had no intro's or endings, they were basically just phrases :3

Anyway, thanks so much for the review, and sorry about the genre mix up, I was in a rush. I would remove this song but I value the review too much XD

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Nov 7, 2011
7:10 PM EST
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2.4 MB
1 min 5 sec

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