Nice, but a few things...
Nice job on this, but I feel there's too much reverb. Also, it might be nice to see more of a build-up with more instruments. It's great dramatic music, but you could take it so much further. I can imagine this finding its way into a game in a variety of places... it's really a great piece. The bass seems out of place... it sounds like an electric bass... you should consider finding a good string bass sound somewhere or consider my advice below.
It seems like the song wants to turn into some sort of gentle rock piece... I would advise you to follow the song where it leads you and to not care about traditional restraints. If it sounds like it is on the border of a different genre, which is really neat to see.
All in all, a nice piece. I don't know why folks voted it down. I enjoyed it greatly. :)