Nice! The rhythm is very cool in this. You've got the drums really nice! The melodies and general synth do give it a nice feel of ambience. Sounds kinda futuristic mixed with tribal elements. The variation you've added in the track makes it exciting and keeps you guessing and the overall energy of the track is very positive. Well done!
Things you could improve:
- Get some drum samples that aren't from Fruity Loops and mix them in aswell. Search the web, there's usually a lot of free samples that can be found (watch out for dodgy websites) and you can use these in your tracks by dragging the new files into your C:\...FL Studio 9\Data\Patches\Packs
- Reverb on your snares and hi hats will enhance the ambient feel.
- To give extra punch to your snares, add a parametric EQ 2, and turn up the 133hz and 4000hz by 2.5dB.
- You could pan stuff left and right at points. For example your rhythmic drums could do a left to right over 2 bars at some point. Use the left and right speaker set up to your advantage by doing similar things with other instruments.