Very Nice

I agree with samulis, the lower registers on the orchestra don't match well with the low voice of the men chanting. I agree that spreading out a variety of octaves with french horns would make it sound much better.

I know how tough writing music can be, and as a fellow musician I think that this is a very nice piece. I really like the incorporation of the multiple ranges of voice chanting made this piece sound really nice. I think you did a very good job with the whole remembrance theme. 4/5 8/10

Keep up the good work :)
-GC117

A great start :)

The low registers sound too muddled, in my opinion. You should consider having perhaps some French horns or instead use a string ensemble spread out across several octaves for a stronger effect. You might want to consider using a snare drum and cymbals in there, it would lend to the song quite nicely. The break before the end is odd, but I reckon it's a choice of style.

A lovely piece. I find it very honorable and kind of you to embark on writing a piece for this day. As I'm American, we have our own Veteran's Day which is similar, and I can relate to the respect deserved by those who serve and have served.

Best of luck,
-Samulis