Always good to see new guys.
I really enjoyed the ambience of this track. The vocals worked very well, but i'd like to see them worked with in a way as to make them into a melody.
You song seems very dissarranged. Try to make the drums not stop so much. If you stop one beat, bring another one in. Make sure that at least one beat is going for at least 8 bars. Just so that it sounds a little more professional sounding.
Other than that, amazing song! I enjoyed it.
PS Can you check out my stuff? I got a new track called 'Anthem of Chaos' and i'd like it if you reviewed it :) Thanks!
Ty fore the review!!!