I'm the first to rate and review, so............
Have some upvotes. It is very upfront and clear, I agree, but there are a few changes I would make -
The beginning: was awesome. Don't change anything.
The middle and the end (from about 1:30 on): What saved that was the bassline. I liked the theme, but it got repetitive after a while, and kind of missed the traffic part a bit. It sounds very hip-hopish, and if you were to change that, I would at least either turn down the leads a bit or something like that. It was upfront, as you said, but it was too upfront at times.
I did become inspired to create techno, but the last time I tried it, I failed miserably, and it sounded awful.
So have a 9/10 and a 5/5 and keep producing!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.