WHY DID U DO THAT!!!!
You murdered this song. :(
You destroyed everything The White Stripes are about.
How many tracks are on this? 5 or 6? Jesus fucking Fuck.
look... that was one of my old songs... my very old songs and yes, it is shit, very shit. dont let that song put you off my new shit. just DONT DOWNLOAD MY OLD SHIT.
Win tang (as much as i like him) didn't do this song justice however i believe u need some original ideas in your music not just rmx's . Regardless of that the piano the guitars the base sounded well good an intresting remix a lot more percussive then the original. fl keys were cool man. great work peace syntrus out (0_0)
thanx but thats not one of my best ones
A few things to keep in mind
Okay first off, I like these initiatives and therefore I will give you an encouraging 4/5 (also because of the 0 voters), but otherwise it would barely be 3/5. Not nearly enough is going on to justify the length and that guitar solo really doesn't make any sense.
What I did like was the contra-melody by the piano. Put more ideas like that into a single song and you're going somewhere.
- Dynamic variances. See the song as a story. Build up tension, create 'pauses'... make it surprising to listen to.
- More interesting drums (hi-hats to start with, add drum fills, etc - you're a drummer, right?)
- Come up with more tracks and see how different combinations work.
- Get better samples somewhere, these sound too cheesy and they must not be very inspiring for you as well.
I think you really have potential. Maintain your originality and build from there! Good luck and check some of my stuff to whine back :)
Thanx and i will check your stuff out :)