Pretty Good Song, Very Good Demo!
If this were the complete song it would require a little more variety to the song. A suggestion: a couple of measures after the comeback you could add a different notes plus a different beat... That would make it amazing!
thankyou!!! i am testing out different chords for it and if i can i may add the vocal sample AND IM FEEEEEEEEEELING and then a drop kicks in, but thats on the table atm :}