I like your ideas. The chords are carefully picked and they work really well. The drum sounds are great. Now, something to think of... ever thought about adding a synth on the background to make the the chords more 'visible'? I'm really bad in putting my thoughts into words but you probably get my point. Especially the third chord could really use some backup, because the note in the bass is the third of the scale. I'm not quite sure if you wanted to create a certain atmosphere by this, but you might as well try to add the chord on the background.
Secondly, I'm not sure about the lead synth. The whole pattern is kinda... strange. Hard to get a grip of it, if you know what I mean. Then again, if you wanted to make it complex, then so be it. One suggestion: try to raise the very last note of the pattern a half-step higher. English is not my native language, so I'm not sure how to say this. But for example, if the second last note was E, then change the last one to F. Just an idea, but it might work.
Oh and one more thing, I'm not sure about the trills (the fast bits on the lead synth), how about slowing them down a bit? I think they could fit better...
Otherwise it's pretty cool. Myself, I'm an academically educated musician so I don't really listen to/know much about this kind of music. But maybe you'll get something out of this. :P
I'll see what I can do, I sort of didn't understand some of what you said but I got the basic idea. And yes, the lead was meant to be a bit weird in a way, which was what the theme of the video I was going to make but somehow I never got to finishing that video. I'm glad you liked this, I really appreciate it!
GoodJob Man Excelent Work Got A Good Feeling From It. keep up the good work i wanna hear another.
Thanks, glad you liked it!