it's supposed to be repetitive, right?
im not really too keen on the difference between house, trance, and the lot; but I know a couple of them are supposed to take a long entrance.
not my type of genre, but i feel it's a good start. the plucking synth that comes in at :50 sounded great, that was a pretty good buildup, however when it climaxed.. nothing really came afterwards. I seem to have that same problem with writing my own music so i can understand how it's difficult to think of something to fill the void after an epic buildup.
nonetheless, a very good start to a genre unknown to me. 9/9. 5/5. keep up the work man :)