Not bad man
This got some pretty cool riffs in it, drums went along well with them..and the odd-time part was nice, adds some prog influence along with the clean part. Only thing I didn't like was how the solos kinda just stopped at certain points abruptly, they need to flow better..adding vibrato to the notes, and you MUST put delay on your solos, and a little reverb...that's what makes a solo sound like, well, a solo lol
And I'm guessing you don't own a bass, I can hear a midi bass...which sounds fake (obviously, because it is lol) but I can't fault ya for that, I've been there, but I found an alternative by detuning my guitar with an effect down an octave. Try that man.. or buy a bass haha
All in all, not bad man, the mix was pretty good rhythm wise, solos sound a little loud, but thats just me..