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Century Puppet

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Author Comments

Hey guys this is just a test I know its pretty crap but I just want some feedback on how I could improve my work.


Constuctive Criticism

First of all, be original. Don't copy others music. Now, not that I am saying you did, I am just saying. Second, start out with a little bit of bass or synth-like sounds. Then go into the main/pre-verse with a little more sound, then the main verse with the ideal level of sound, maybe have 4 or 5 instruments working together. Make sure the sounds blend together at times, and make sure to have harmonious sections as well. You also want to have a steady and constant rhythm or bass line that is unique to each section. Follow it up with a section that would only be heard once, like a solo, just with more than one or two instruments. You want your music to sound like you put a LOT of time into it, even if you didn't. This sounds like you probably spent maybe around 30 minutes or something making it. Some other music I have heard sounds like the artist took months working on and perfecting it. Hope this helps. And remember, be original

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hairygiraffe responds:

thanks buddy for the review and yeah I think i do need to work harder and longer on my work thanks again this review really helps.

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Credits & Info

2.40 / 5.00

Oct 30, 2011
8:20 AM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 32 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.