Nice and catchy. Great structure. But this song is lacking some sort of chorus. If there is a chorus already, I certainly didn't pick up on it (lack of dynamics, dramatic build up, etc).
Personally, I would have introduced the bassdrum before the snare. I kinda lost the beat of track with two up beat sounds playing together. The bassdrum brought it back for me, but was too late. you need to make a good impression on the listener. You need to make the song easy to keep up with, so the listener wants to hear more! So yeah, kick drum first.
On the fact that this song is very short, I'll have to give you a 4/5 8/10.
I think there is great potential here ;) feel free to send me a message if/when you get around to completing it :D I'd love to see this evolve. Good stuff man, keep it up!
I know what you meen about the kick, ill see what i can do.
But you know when i master this it should sound alot better too :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.