This is good in all respects except one.
I love this song. I'll get that out of the way right now. The beat flows effortlessly with the lyrics and blends into a mounting crescendo. That's excellent.
What's not so excellent is the fact that the song stops in the middle and /preaches/ at me. I'd love to loop this or a couple of days on end, but I can't do that when it takes four minutes out of ten to tell passerby not to kill people based on race. It's extremely jarring and would function much better if this song was split into this version, with the poem, and a loopable version without.
To me, this song is still in an unfinished state.
In the very first version, we had it the way that you described, but then it sounded monotonous throughout the song--that's when we decided to break it up with the poem towards the 2nd half. :) Thank you for your feedback/review!
Sweet raptor jesus!!!
This is absolutely a phenomenal song! Kudos to you man!
It is my honor to accept your compliment! However, I would also like to pass along thanks to all of those involved in creating/providing certain elements to complete the song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.