What is wrong with everyone?
Maybe these people just aren't into classical music.
This was beatifully done. Good work!
I'm guessing this is the feeling you were going for, which is fair enough, but personally i think it needs a lead melody. At about halfway through the song I'm expecting a violin to fade in with an accending cressendo scale or something along those lines. Something like the viloin in purple jazz would fit beatifully.
But again its your piece, and either way the progression at the start is really good.