This is a legit Goa/Psytrance song!
I love psytrance and you had the making of something quite brilliant. Too bad you're not going to be making anymore songs in this genre, because you'd be excellent at it.
Instrumentation: You definitely got the Astral Projection sound down quite nicely. Your bassline, lead, and other synths were well done for a first attempt. Plus, you did a great job on selecting the kick, and that voice clip. Oh, and the guitar was pretty badass!
Composition: While this may not be as intense as Infected Mushroom, Cosmo, Hallucinogen, Penta, or Orca; your melodies were pretty good. However, after the 3:27 mark, it's just silence. Was that a part of your rendering problem or something that you overlooked?
Other: I can see this being used in a few submissions if the movie/game creator is very clever.
-Goes silent after the 3:27 mark
Overall: Mr Jay, how would you like a nine from me? (4.5/5)