where's the lyrics?
hot damn man I got left hangin somethin fierce. This needs lyrics badly. But aside from that. There's definitely an original element here that I've never heard before. But if you just chop it up a little bit and add a bridge like Tri said, this track would so rock. Keep it up dude. looking forward to more... with lyrics this time^_^
eighted and foured
i can tell you didn't just get a loop off of garageband. this is a cool beat. but, i think you should say that it's just a beat, and that there are no lyrics to it. it kind of leaves the listener, who is waiting for some spit, hanging. the beat is nice and intricate, but it's lacking bass. maybe you could beatbox some? also, look to insert a bridge part for your song, so the diversity is better. it's cool stuff, though. i just wrote a latin/hip-hop song, and it's on the audio portal for today... you should check it out and review, too. peace, and good luck with ur music, bro.